View Full Version : Josh Ajbright-Touch
04-28-2008, 02:32 AM
This is Touch
04-28-2008, 03:14 AM
I will tell you my opinion about your track.
I hate the begin, it starts just like that, it doesn't have a proper intro.
The clap you use is very high(vol) in my opinion, and it is distorted, therefore it sound really bad. You should change it asap.
The first two minutes are really boring, always the same stuff, no new elements, no ambient, just an annoying pad with some simple drums and a horrible clap. After a while some cool bass starts while the pads fade out, and then we have a little break with some variation, but the sound itself is so distorted, the quality really sucks, it really needs to have a proper mixing, EQuing and Compression. The end is also very simple and boring, just like the begin, and then it fades out. This track goes nowhere. It's just drums and bass, it's a very simple track, that does have a very bad sound quality. You should really learn some technical stuff.
Overall, this track is a typical tech-house, electroish, whatever you want to call it track, which I don't like. It doesn't have any melody, nor emotion, it is just another track, it doesn't have its unique moment, etc.
My overall opinion is that you should really do less but better, as I see you post around 1track/day. Also, as I said, improve your quality and maybe try to add some melody to the track, but I guess that's not your purpose, maybe you just want it to be another track...
04-28-2008, 04:13 AM
your shit sucks alot more than i expected are you and miguel but buddies, because i shortened the song so it wouldnt be lon and second of im not worried about mrs. miguels opinion (you) because the label likes it and peace be with you brother.
04-28-2008, 14:23 PM
im not worried about mrs. miguels opinion (you)
your shit sucks alot more than i expected
What are you talking about? You have never heard anything I made...
the label likes it and peace be with you brother.
what label? I seriously doubt any label would accept such song, because as I said, IMO, its sound quality is very bad. Try playing it on some proper studio speakers and you will hear how bad it sounds.
And please watch out your words, because I did not insult you, so you should not insult me either, you're just showing your disrespect towards people that do not appreciate your song. you can't please everyone, keep that in mind.
04-28-2008, 16:06 PM
I guess the first thing I will start with is your attitude. You post a thread containing you music for the pure possibility of someone giving you feed back about it. Good or bad. Regardless what "you" think about it and you thrash back so arrogantly and negatively...
Back on topic.
Listening to this track, It does start as if half cut through a track. I'm guessing this is supposed to be tech trance?
I have been to many techy trance events produced by Australian, French, German and English DJs. They would not play this out.
With that said, this track needs a lot of work. I believe that you could make a great track out of this if:
- You get rid of that washed out high end pitch sample!
- Start with a basic song construction and work off that
- Listen carefully to why a song has an introduction and an outro.
I liked the melody that you used in the chorus(sorta area)... But in all honesty. There was no construction, samples washed out due to others and... I felt that it went no where. A song is supposed to take you on a journey.
- DJ MI aka M.I. Productions
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