please critique my tune so i can make it better

[maudio]

hello everyone i have been playing arround with reason and this is what i have come up with so far. im a newbie to producing but im learning fast. oppinions and suggestions welcome. the track should be finished some time january.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=U9YJFO7F

[Alex E]

mmm well there isn't much to say actually, because it isn't much. This is really too little to talk about. But IMO it's not good as a main tune, you should phunk it up a bit and then let it run on the background on certain parts. Also: I don't know how long you've been trying already, but better not already try finishing it in Jan. that's way too early if this is all you have now. When you've finished it, wait a week, and then listen to it again and see if you still think it's good. Just a hint.

[maudio]

thanks alex your pointers have been well taken into consideration. if you can think of anything else please let me know. this is why i love this site. mature and productive response. thanks again alex

[2030]

It sounds like the first 29 seconds of a track, which are often quite boring, and even for that its a little repetitive. Like Alex said, if this is the main tune/melody than its pretty bad, but if it is just the first 29 seconds then i cant really say anything about it yet.

[levap]

You can do better