My first track

[FedeX]

Hi ^^ here is my first unfinished song...

www.myspace.com/fedejaimes

I want to know your opinion plis

[2030]

Kinda psytrance isnt it? It starts very cool, has a unique theme, but its very monotonous & repetitive after the first 30 secs. Also didnt like that the first vocals were repeated a second time with some reverb effect on it. Anyways it could be a really cool tune if you put some more work into it, a bit more melody

[DeeJayTuono]

A good work :blink1: ... maybe a little minimal, AW sounds good:bg:

[FedeX]

Thanks fot the advices partners.I will work more harder to make a better track.

[skiil]

you should use something more than only vanguard ;P

[DJ_MI]

Kinda psytrance isnt it? It starts very cool, has a unique theme, but its very monotonous & repetitive after the first 30 secs. Also didnt like that the first vocals were repeated a second time with some reverb effect on it. Anyways it could be a really cool tune if you put some more work into it, a bit more melody
+1

I agree!