Manjaro - Equinox

[priaulx]

Hi All

New to the forums and by way of an introduction, here is a track i've just finished.

Been producing dance music for longer than I care to mention(!) but this is my first proper attempt at Trance. BTW it's 138BPM

Further mixes to follow

I'd appreciate any feedback or constructive critcism

http://soundcloud.com/lyndon-fielden/manjaro-equinox-lyndon-fielden

[Mantio]

hi mate

not a bad soundign track there. got all the foundations of a really nice tune.

you just need to fill the sounds out a bit. try adding another main lead synth layered underneath the one thats in there but with a lower sound to fill it out.

Overall all the sounds need to be fuller i would say. more reverb and some stero enhancement.

but sounding nice so far.

I'd quite happily do a remix of it if you fancied it as I like the melody. let me know

[Mantio]

hi mate

not a bad soundign track there. got all the foundations of a really nice tune.

you just need to fill the sounds out a bit. try adding another main lead synth layered underneath the one thats in there but with a lower sound to fill it out.

Overall all the sounds need to be fuller i would say. more reverb and some stero enhancement.

but sounding nice so far.

I'd quite happily do a remix of it if you fancied it as I like the melody. let me know

[priaulx]

Many thanks Mantio for your input. I'll take your advice on board!