My 1st attempt at trance would like feedback.
Desperado Music
I would start by recommending you get (or develop) some proper samples and or VSTi's/Synths, the sounds you use are very basic imo.
Your kickdrum for instance is almost non-existent, same goes for any (sub) bass.
second, a lot of the elements in your track sound offbeat/clash making it very messy. make sure are your samples/sounds are sync.
then there's the levels/ Eq..
for a very first attempt i would say its not bad and the ideas/melodies are there. Keep at it, expand your library, watch tutorials (mixing/eqíng compression etc) and practice practice practice.
my 2 cents.
good luck