Sin3waves- Prog House/Trance composition feedback request

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Found this in my dropbox. My friend Geoff ( Stonedove) made a prog house track and in the past 2 years I attempted to remix it. ( i started 7 versions lol)

This ones 70% finished.
The mixing & levels are poor.

What do you think of the feel and arrangement?


Is it worth working on for a potential release through trancefix record label.

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This is very nice. I think if you come up with a nice structure and refine it a bit - just send it to Solarstone. Trust me the guy listens all songs that are send to him and this has Pure trance vibes all over it.
 
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This is very nice. I think if you come up with a nice structure and refine it a bit - just send it to Solarstone. Trust me the guy listens all songs that are send to him and this has Pure trance vibes all over it.
Wow, blimey, thats really great.
Do you listen to a lot of his label’s work? Il try my best to refine it and build better structure. Thank you
 

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Wow, blimey, thats really great.
Do you listen to a lot of his label’s work? Il try my best to refine it and build better structure. Thank you
Yeah I noticed lately I almost don't have mixes that I don't play at least one song from his label on it. And I check all trance releases on beatport this year. At this point I don't even remember names of songs and artist since I go through so much releases 😆
 
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Some lovely textures in there, especially in the mainpart and they feel full and alive despite the non-mixing/mastering issue. Reminds me abit of Reii's stuff from 2010-2015. Personally I prefer something with a little more edge to it rather than this overly smooth" clinical snappy clean samples/sounds that is pretty prominent especially in the build. Never was into into this fingersnapping snare/hat or whatever it is for example. Maybe try to contrast the overall atmospheric lush city-jungle-utopia-sound with a touch of eerieness/darkness here and there. It does have a little bit of that already, but somehow I feel it needs something more.

The arrangement is obviously lacking right now, but overall has big potential. I do think its worth working on yes, maybe for a tf release, what say you @Hensmon @Gagi ?
 
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