what do you think of this techno song it's a remix

KiaraPOxley

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Hello Everyone, i hope you had a good week, this is a new remix i recorded its called waited the original track can be found on youtube, the song has a tb303 pattern that i created the vocals are mine, and i made this with fl studio, let me know what you think, if the vocals need to be adjusted i will fix them
 

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Rhythm is all over the place. You need some structure, some groove. Start simple
 

Jetflag

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ok and how can i fix that its in the 140s bpm, but i appreciate the advice thanks
Tempo /bpm doesn’t matter, it could be 180 and still chaotic. Best advice would probably be to take an existing (good) track that you like/ fits what you’re trying to make. And take example/recreate that in terms of rhythm/ beats.

this teaches you a lot because besides learning to recreate, it also teaches you to listen in detail.
 

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ok how can i make a groove the bpm is in the 140s

140 Bpm is fine, its how all the elements come together that form a tracks rhythm. You beat, FX, synths do not gel naturally together, but sort of compete, feeling a little random. Jetflags advice above is good, take an existing track and try and replicate it in your own way.
 

KiaraPOxley

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140 Bpm is fine, its how all the elements come together that form a tracks rhythm. You beat, FX, synths do not gel naturally together, but sort of compete, feeling a little random. Jetflags advice above is good, take an existing track and try and replicate it in your own way.
Ok, As I Said I use fl studio to make the beats synths, sequences i used to use sony acid 8.0 to sample songs, and the fl studio program i have has arpeggiator feature, but anyway thanks for listening and have a good weekend
 
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