What do you think of this Trance song i recorded

[KiaraPOxley]

Hello gentlemen this is my first time here, i been doing techno and trance since 2012, i started off with sampling, and now i use fl studio to create my own sound, the vocals are mine enjoy

 

[Jetflag]

Hi! Welcome to the forum, my first thoughts when listening to this is:
I wouldn’t call this trance. It’s too rhythm /experimental focussed and would place this in the techno category

in terms of mix/composition I would suggest giving your vox recording some more work, especially cut the low/end reverb of it to make it fit better in the mix.

my 2 cents

hope this helps

 

[KiaraPOxley]

Hi! Welcome to the forum, my first thoughts when listening to this is:
I wouldn’t call this trance. It’s too rhythm /experimental focussed and would place this in the techno category

in terms of mix/composition I would suggest giving your vox recording some more work, especially cut the low/end reverb of it to make it fit better in the mix.

my 2 cents

hope this helps

Thanks i understand, it wasn't easy making this song, the bpm is 141 , the song is about falling in love with the right guy, and staying with him, but i will make some more changes , i am glad you like the song