Grazba - Spikee

[Grazba]

hey every one i'm a new member jsut prensented my self on the apropriate forum !!
so there s my first track (i started 2 months ago) !!
http://music.myspace.com/index.cfm?f...0&plid=1057177
waiting for feedback ^^ !!

[Grazba]

sorry for the double post !! but can you give your opinion please !! insult it if u want ^^ just say smthing please !! ^^

[Mathias van Ness]

Hmm, quite good Your first track, you said? Nice. It sounds like tune before few years. In which program did you make it?
In 4:50 sounds like electro ^^
But you end too quickly, i think

[wasif_TF]

I can feel your desperate heart breathing waiting to hear what other people do think about my try?
After 2:00, it sounds great. I like it. about the length....PERFECT.
I would like to hear this tune sometimes when I feel sleepy and I want to wake my head or a time when I am all alone at my home.I couldn't believe that this is your ever first track???
By the way, which do you use?
I think FL with integration of reason as your effect's processor.
Keep trying, you are always welcome from my side to showcase your creativity here and I would to represents some honest comments on your piece of work.

[Grazba]

thanks evry one ^^ !!
for the software i use reason 4 ! alone without a keyboard (once i get some money i'll get my self an axiom49 i hope) !!
yeah my first track !! but i made a lot of tries, not complete trracks, just to experiment !!
i used FL studio for 1 week i friend have it but i prefer Reason !!
Thank you you again !