G-Meister - Bed Time Stories (original mix)

[Voci]

Good morning

Definitely got some great potential tbh.

My thoughts:

- You need a different clap, this one is annoying. Well actually perhaps a lot of drum sounds could be improved/more interesting.
- Obviously there's no intro/well thought out outro (yet?), so its no good for DJ's to play it out this way if they wanted to.
- The melody at 2:04 section is not good enough if you want something really serious with the track.
- the melody section after it, 2:30, is good, original, good sounds, build a track around it!
- If you add some '8-bit'-ish sounds that would really improve the atmosphere on the track, I think it would really suit the track.
- I hear a 'pad'/string at 2:45 joining, make it louder/more present, perhaps use it in a breakdown.
- The melody at 4:20 seems to be a varation on the one at 2:30, that could be interesting to use to.

Well, try those things... or perhaps I should remix/collab your track Leave a message if you're interested.

[G Meister]

Hi Voci. Thanks for your in-depth feedback. As mentioned before, I haven't been on this forum for a while. But I will have a look improving this track. Listened to your latest work and I must say: very good job there. Will post some comments later.