Melody doesn't sound random to me, I think it could be even be good, but man there is so much harsh sounding synths, the detune, the supercharged nature. Very noisy, kick very thin/plastick. Trance back in the day, even the bangers, were so pleasant to the ears. It could be dreamy, soft and it doesn't try and kill you - but it still has energy.
I'm not into this sub-genre of trance you are going for (and very picky with sound design), so take my feedback as you will, i'm not the audience you probably make this for, but why not just try a more balanced, breathable, soft, dare I say delicate approach sometime and see how it goes? Dreamy > Nuclear. Your energy, track design, build-up is solid, but that reskin is essential for my taste.
p.s also character to the baseline. Not just bang bang bang bang. Let it roll, or groove, or something.