I automated a filter on the flute and added one of the atmospheric chords sounds that on the other part you can barely feel and hear. Overall drop feels better now. I am very hesitant to do other changes, because I always jump into a rabbit hole when I try rewriting song. I already destroyed two original idea this year by changing things to the point where the original idea was lost.
Breakbeat needs more variation to make it interested, other effects (not necessarily percs) could help with more that more varied rhythm. Flute is nice but as LL said its too repetitive. In fact most of the elements are used too much, too simple and for too long actually. Would recommend having more clearly defined structure/sections that add variation. Interesting idea though.