Yeah, it doesn't sound too bad. The beats are very dull though. Way too much high-frequency 'click' on the kick. No power in it at all. I don't like that big snare-clap either. The stabby bass also sucks. Too prominent, crunchy.
But the melody and synths are alright.
I don't see why you'd name the track "Take Me Away" though. Ben Gold knows, just like everyone else, that EVERYONE will think: is this 4 Strings - Take Me Away. Sometimes you get silly remakes. In this case it's a new track, but why give it a title that is already used on a famous classic.