Bobby Summa - Signals from Heaven -(WIP/1st full length arrangement)

Bobby Summa

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Apologies. Start of track recorded badly (probable v high clipping)


Full length track. A track that im quite happy with the sounds and melody but i think the arrangement and structure is heavily lacking so far. Alternatively , it might be quite good.

sometimes its hard when critiquing ones own production but would people agree that though there a nice elements, the energy becomes very flat at times regarding the flow and motion of the track? I cant decide, hence the struggle being objective in critiquing ones own productions

 
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Apologies. Start of track recorded badly (probable v high clipping)


Full length track. A track that im quite happy with the sounds and melody but i think the arrangement and structure is heavily lacking so far. Alternatively , it might be quite good.

sometimes its hard when critiquing ones own production but would people agree that though there a nice elements, the energy becomes very flat at times regarding the flow and motion of the track? I cant decide, hence the struggle being objective in critiquing ones own productions


Can you please send me a lossless copy?
 
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Progrez

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Really nice melody that melody is very memorable! Just needs a bit of work on the punchiness and maybe add more pads and make the percussions more pronounced.
 
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Yeah I like it, very Solarstone-ish. Definitely check a few of his songs for reference.

To be honest you don't need it, but if you are unsure of the structure you might get some ideas.
 
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some very nice ideas but i think the first thing that should be addressed is the foundations, kick and bass need to be a lot heavier as they sound kinda wafer thin at the moment. structure wise i like the flow of it but yeah if i was to use another one of my weird analogies it's like taylor swift, in that she currently needs to do a ton of squats because it's a bit light in the ass, then it'll be just right
 
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some very nice ideas but i think the first thing that should be addressed is the foundations, kick and bass need to be a lot heavier as they sound kinda wafer thin at the moment. structure wise i like the flow of it but yeah if i was to use another one of my weird analogies it's like taylor swift, in that she currently needs to do a ton of squats because it's a bit light in the ass, then it'll be just right
Noice! Cheers. Cool I need to take more the ‘Megan Trainer’ approach.
All about that Bass, No Trebble! 😉
 

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I feel like meghan trainor is a bit of a hypocrite because that song had a bunch of treble. honestly these celebrities are so out of touch it's like they don't know anything about music
 
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Bobby Summa

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Yeah, someone should remix it ! A Bass House (or Future Bass remix ( what ever they are! ! - these styles actually might be awesome. I just wouldnt know what genre I’m listening too lol.