Nice intro, however the small kinda introductionary teaser melody/notes at 0.44-0.49 feels random/out of place and throws me off. Ruins the vibe even a little. Also my cheesometer hits warning/caution levels.
Drums comes in. Not bad, but not the biggest fan of the choice of clap and kick here. The shakers are ok. It still works fine but personally not huge on the combo. Its too close to the deadmau5/adam k & soha 2010 vibes. The pluck melody isnt the strongest, its borderline cheese/too simple/basic.But great work on the overall atmosphere.
The break is nice but is also a little out of place and doesnt stich well together what you had before. And the "drop" and what comes after the drop is basically back to the beginning parts again with the not-so-strong pluck melody with some additional notes and then it slowly kinda fades out. Feels a bit undershelming tbh.
Thats my initial thoughts on the tune. I dont think its complete. I like the backbone of the it, i like the intro, i like the atmosphere and and small details, i like the layering of those stuff you have going on. I dont like the choice of drums even though they work. I personally dont like the melody you have. Its too basic/cheesy. I think if you are gonna keep it you need to give it some flair like changing up the rhythm for it or add something else to it to make it more interesting/impactful.
