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marvas

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Hi guys, I'm back with another amateur attempt! Looking forward to any feedback.

You can completely disregard the video, took some random shots in the garden just for the sake of not using a photo as background.

I've used GarageBand once again.

 
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Some nice ideas as with your last track. I like how atmospheric your synth work sounds.

It still sounds unfinished to me though. Lacking percussion or any real ebb & flow to the mix. Everything just kind of happens (if that makes any sense.)

Nice kitty :)
 
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Thanks @LostLegend , I think it will be a while til I get that flow right, but until then I will keep experimenting.

I would not really call this next one "trance", however I had a few enjoyable afternoons trying to make it.

 

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love the melody idea (and the cat) you've got going on there. but I agree that the track is at its initial concept stage, and needs further working out :)
 
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Thanks @LostLegend , I think it will be a while til I get that flow right, but until then I will keep experimenting.

I would not really call this next one "trance", however I had a few enjoyable afternoons trying to make it.

Yeah, I like the synth work in this.
It has that 90's era psychedelic electronica thing that was going on with Future Sound of London and the like, Even a bit of old Tangerine Dream in there as well.

I dig it! (y)
 
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I guess I shouldn't spam you with a new topic every time I make one of these, so I will just add them here in the comments until I feel something worthy of a new topic comes up.