- Nov 10, 2020
- 133 Posts
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Hello again, fellas! I'm back with another attempt, still trying things from my iphone, still using GarageBand.
marvas - whale cry
- Thread starter marvas
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Your best one yet, you're improving. Sounds more professional and the melody/theme is nice.
The middle part is strong, the start and endings weakeast bits. Its only 4 minutes though so not much time to really lead the listener through different phases, Track structure could do with bit more variation in that regards. Percussion still lacks a little drive and personality, although appreciate the staggered beats. It would be great if there was a groove.
The middle part is strong, the start and endings weakeast bits. Its only 4 minutes though so not much time to really lead the listener through different phases, Track structure could do with bit more variation in that regards. Percussion still lacks a little drive and personality, although appreciate the staggered beats. It would be great if there was a groove.
- Jun 27, 2020
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Holy whale balls, this sounds like an intro to an Electronic Architecture compilation. Loving it! What you can do with just an iPhone and a GarageBand... Really have no issues with the way it is, but for me this is really more of an intro track for a compilation/mix than a standalone work (but it's still great).
