Mood Swings

[Otherworld]

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MOODS SWINGS

My name is Carwyn Jones - I Love music, especially Trance, melidic and ambient. Annwn (my producer name) is the Otherworld in Welsh mythology. Ruled by Arawn, it was essentially a wor

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[Bobby Summa]

Welcome to the Music production area Annwn / Otherworld.
Sorry, missed this track dude.

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Sounding nice mate. Got some great melody, vibe and sounds. Atmosphere is generally real nice.

Bit silent at the end of the first minute for a short time.

Lacks a bit of presence around 2.45 (sounds and melody are fine, they just could do with a little rising in presence/enegy in the mix or some kind of further filter level maybe I feel). Arrangement is good in areas but looses its thread/narrative at times (imho) leading feeling a little unstructured .
(forgot to mention)…the intro is a bit sudden too.

Overall got some real nice parts. But (imho) in general could do with a bit more of a refined structure and more presence in areas. Great parts in there tho mate. Nice work.

 

[Otherworld]

Welcome to the Music production area Annwn / Otherworld.
Sorry, missed this track dude.

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Sounding nice mate. Got some great melody, vibe and sounds. Atmosphere is generally real nice.

Bit silent at the end of the first minute for a short time.

Lacks a bit of presence around 2.45 (sounds and melody are fine, they just could do with a little rising in presence/enegy in the mix or some kind of further filter level maybe I feel). Arrangement is good in areas but looses its thread/narrative at times (imho) leading feeling a little unstructured .
(forgot to mention)…the intro is a bit sudden too.

Overall got some real nice parts. But (imho) in general could do with a bit more of a refined structure and more presence in areas. Great parts in there tho mate. Nice work.

Thanks Bobby for the feedback.. will try and improve on the areas that you pointed out. Much appreciated