New song on the edge of progressive house and commercial trance

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Oof, sounds really disjointed to me, especially the vocals and the chords. Potentially off-key. The chord melody itself is kinda weird as well, and it goes on for too long. Not sure what advice I have that would improve it.
 
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Oof, sounds really disjointed to me, especially the vocals and the chords. Potentially off-key. The chord melody itself is kinda weird as well, and it goes on for too long. Not sure what advice I have that would improve it.
Only the vocal was off key. It was a male vocal and I wanted a female one, didn't bother me that much but I reseted it to be in key. I took one of the chord sounds down an octave, sounds a bit less uplifting, but also less weird. I can always make a shorter version but it's mostly the intro and outro that are 2 min and that's why it sounds long. I can make this the extended dj friendly version and make a shorter one in the next few days. Listen again and give some more feedback.