Nice. Instantly liked the bassline and general balance between percs and other elements. The atmospheres and sounds you've used are also really nice, and its generally in a style that I just love. I listened and enjoyed the track a number of times.
Although I really like all the invidual elements you use in the breakdown sometimes I think they kind of clash harmonically or feel a bit awkward. For example the vocal atmos I think can work well, but at certain points it feels out of melodic sync (mostly towards the end of the sample when its higher). Its possible the synth melody and basseline are also a bit awkward together sometimes. Around 5:40 its all togeter and feels not quite right to me.
The melody is quite cool and simple though, and actually an oldschool pattern and feel. It does become a little repetitive after a while, either because it inherently in its structure, or the fact it loops for quite a long time without anything really mixing it up. I have a feeling its the pattern itself, which maybe needs a little variation to give it better lifespan over multiple minutes.
Its really great to see you share your work here. Would love to release one of your tracks one day, especially if this is the kind of style you are putting out there.
