That sound (sort of a swell) in the break is too annoying, it's for sure a preset off of some synth that tries to emulate a hardware one. Actually, most of the melodic elements are presets.
That said, I really do appreciate the ideas here, and would like to hear a couple more in this style. This, to me, feels like a tasteful crossover between synthwave and trance. There's no annoying 80s snares (and drums overall) just for the sake of it, there isn't too many cliche synthwave ideas. This has a bit of synthwave (some sound design), bit of orchestral (breakdown melodies), and bit of regular trance (beatwork, "climax").
But it needs something more, there is no richness to a track that relies heavily on the sound design. The beats are simply not creative at all - I don't mind the simplicity. Improving the beatwork is a good start, as well as FX. Then I would improve the "climax" a bit as it really sounds empty and like it's missing something.