SleepyBuddah - Blue Pearl (Full length)

[SleepyBuddah]

Here's a nice little project I have started recently and which been a great learning experience in terms of levels in general.

It's a full track as is and I think it's close to being a finished one.
Would love to know what you guys think of it.

Blue Pearl v.2.3.1

Still learning, getting better....

on.soundcloud.com

 

[Bobby Summa]

There’s some really sweet elements to this track dude. Periods where a very great atmosphere comes together. The overall vibe is lovely.

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Suggestions…

I would love to hear a longer build up in the intro. Currently there are lots of sounds beginning immediately.

That pluck starting 2.37, it’s very nice, but … I keep wanting the feedback level or mix level on the delay to go on a lot longer so that it glitters more creating even greater atmosphere.

There’s something about the open hihat that doesn’t sit quite right. To me it’s thin. Sorry if you’ve worked on that part a lot, but I’d consider maybe using a new one.

Dont ask me what as it’s my achilles heel when I produce, but at some points the arrangement / structure I feel could be improved. In areas it’s great with what sounds come in next but for the track listening experience as a whole I feel there is potentially areas to improve on in the narrative of the track if looking for release ready music.

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I see the effort you have put into this and applaud you for it. There is much talent shown in this track. Overall there is an uplifting vibe throughout and some great hooks in there which has created a solid atmosphere for the piece. I also love the name

 

[SleepyBuddah]

There’s some really sweet elements to this track dude. Periods where a very great atmosphere comes together. The overall vibe is lovely.

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Suggestions…

I would love to hear a longer build up in the intro. Currently there are lots of sounds beginning immediately.

That pluck starting 2.37, it’s very nice, but … I keep wanting the feedback level or mix level on the delay to go on a lot longer so that it glitters more creating even greater atmosphere.

There’s something about the open hihat that doesn’t sit quite right. To me it’s thin. Sorry if you’ve worked on that part a lot, but I’d consider maybe using a new one.

Dont ask me what as it’s my achilles heel when I produce, but at some points the arrangement / structure I feel could be improved. In areas it’s great with what sounds come in next but for the track listening experience as a whole I feel there is potentially areas to improve on in the narrative of the track if looking for release ready music.

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I see the effort you have put into this and applaud you for it. There is much talent shown in this track. Overall there is an uplifting vibe throughout and some great hooks in there which has created a solid atmosphere for the piece. I also love the name

Great feedback mate!

I agree on the hihats as they can be done a lot better. Will also review the track as a whole and adjust where needed.

Thanks for the compliments dude, it means a lot to me The track itself wasn't really meant to go in the uplifting box, just wanted to make Trance and this is what came out of it.
Namasté