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hey,

Your sounds are very unique, have you tried to sell at NCS?

in general, I am a fan of more uplifting sounds, if I can say a word of criticism, I definitely miss a reverb, although the genre you represent (I can sense big room and house) likes to be subtle when it comes to this effect. Certainly when I'm in the mood I will listen and speak up. Overall, I like it
 
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I guess you'd have to fit a bit but for me you fit there


lots of house combinations with other species, generally hybrids



and you probably need a lot of luck ...
even though the quality of your songs is high
 
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I guess you'd have to fit a bit but for me you fit there


lots of house combinations with other species, generally hybrids
I appreciate you taking the time and effort to listen and give advice :) thank you
 
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so at least tell me what is so subtle about this reverber on purpose or ...
 
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so at least tell me what is so subtle about this reverber on purpose or ...
Depends on which parts. I have reverb on snare, hi hats, synths, bass, and the only thing I left dry was the sub and kick. Crash has verb. Maybe it is too subtle.
 
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Depends on which parts. I have reverb on snare, hi hats, synths, bass, and the only thing I left dry was the sub and kick. Crash has verb. Maybe it is too subtle.
I can't judge it, I probably exaggerate in that and that's why I ask it helpful for me


I misunderstood when I said the words of criticism forgive me ...
 
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I can't judge it, I probably exaggerate in that and that's why I ask it helpful for me


I misunderstood when I said the words of criticism forgive me ...
Bro, you can say anything you like to me about my music or yours. It is how I learn :) Youre a help and that is how I see it.
 

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Bro, you can say anything you like to me about my music or yours. It is how I learn :) Youre a help and that is how I see it.

I will always say, but with respect because I still miss you a bit. I do not understand a lot and I do not want to judge anyone when I am not able to help. Another assessment is pointless
 
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No prob :) I guess that trying not to sound like all the others takes me out of some foundational parts. I have had a hard time last few years enjoying music because it all sounds the same.
 
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No prob :) I guess that trying not to sound like all the others takes me out of some foundational parts. I have had a hard time last few years enjoying music because it all sounds the same.

I would also like to get out but my heart uplifting I won't do anything I want to enjoy it then I have a chance that maybe someone will enjoy it with me


I know that people change, probably someday I will take my mind and hit more peaceful areas. today, however, I miss dopamine and I like energetic uplifting,
 
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Well structured song. Good melodies/ themes. The song is definitly telling an interresting story.

my biggest issue is some of the sounds you're using and the levelling. Pretty much all the drums you're using are all fine and work okish, but I feel they, and especially the kick, could do with a bit of punch and prominence in the mix. Also maybe add some additional FX to guide your transitions.

Your leads could do with a bit of fullness. You can work this up with a stereo enhancer, layering or adding reverb/delay & compression.

My biggest issue I think is the bass you're employing, especially the arp one you start of with, it sounds...hollow and in the wrong set of frequencies for that type of element/sound in your track.... a bit like a casio keyboard preset if you get my drift. You could try to fix this with all sorts of hoops and stiches, but I would recommend you replace it with something else.


so in short. - levels particulairy drums, - more fullness in the sounds you use for your melodic elements and do something about that bass

for the rest i think great work on the theme's melodies etc. (y)

@Magnevi could you give this man your ears? I'm still only on headphones due to sleeping toddler shenanigans & moving places.
 
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people with potential are required. I am jealous I would like to be on your stage
 
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Well structured song. Good melodies/ themes. The song is definitly telling an interresting story.

my biggest issue is some of the sounds you're using and the levelling. Pretty much all the drums you're using are all fine and work okish, but I feel they, and especially the kick, could do with a bit of punch and prominence in the mix. Also maybe add some additional FX to guide your transitions.

Your leads could do with a bit of fullness. You can work this up with a stereo enhancer, layering or adding reverb/delay & compression.

My biggest issue I think is the bass you're employing, especially the arp one you start of with, it sounds...hollow and in the wrong set of frequencies for that type of element/sound in your track.... a bit like a casio keyboard preset if you get my drift. You could try to fix this with all sorts of hoops and stiches, but I would recommend you replace it with something else.


so in short. - levels particulairy drums, - more fullness in the sounds you use for your melodic elements and do something about that bass

for the rest i think great work on the theme's melodies etc. (y)

@Magnevi could you give this man your ears? I'm still only on headphones due to sleeping toddler shenanigans & moving places.
Working on fuller synths has been a struggle recently.. I have gotten closer on my next tune, but its in a diff genre. Thanks for the feedback :) Always pushing for the next best song. There are some things I am noticing I dont like as much now myself. Example, that ride at the end annoys me now. Back to the beat cave :)
 
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I gave you a follow on Soundcloud.....nice interesting percussions and some good plucks youve used,i like the underlying synths you have there,id probably base the track around those,and build them up...
thanks bro... I am striving for this 5% and sometimes making mistakes instead of reaching it.