man, you're wasting your great ideas (beginners always have the best ideas, because they're still fresh and not influeced/polluted by everybody else) on a shit sound, look at the labels you're releasing on - Girlfriend Records, Toast & Jam Recordings, Acuna.. man these are garbage labels that sign pretty much anything they got sent.
do it right, learn some more, YouTube is full of tutorials, it wouldn't even hurt to download a template or two just to look inside - the samples used, the processing, the mastering
and don't sign your stuff just anywhere to get it released, what's the point in that? you got talent so aim bigger
sorry if that hurts but it's way better than these 'nice one blablabla' mindless comments and I hope it hurts enough to make you grow