First release! - Bardak - Wayman

[BARDAK-MUSIC]

Hey guys, here is my first release online!
would like to share this with you and get some feedback
what do you think about this track?
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[Hensmon]

Production wise everything sounds pretty nice, but honestly it is just like 100 other psy-trance tracks released each week. There is nothing identifiable for you as an artist. Also Psy-Trance of old used to have flow and build (not just a 16 bar build up). It didn't really on gimmicky sound effects to create a psychedlic feel, it was the whole track. Anyway I guess its a good starting point for a first release.

 

[thefica]

I Like it. Nicely produced, decent variation with some nice melodic elements.