It starts off sounding like a well produced trance song. I like the sounds, i like the melody. All the way up to 1:15 you really have me listening because i like what i hear.
And then at 1:15 It sounds like you didnt know how to introduce the kick to the song, its a bit akward the way it comes into the song, so static.
Then comes the takeoff and for me the kick is way too dominant.
Also i feel like the only thing thats happening in the takeoff is that the kick is louder and the synths a bit louder as well so therefore it becomes too repetitive for my taste when there is no building on the melody or other sounds added. It becomes just a synth melody and a kick.
But when all of that is said, there are many nice sounds in this song and productionwise its not bad except for what i have mentioned above (which is ofcourse based on my personal taste which may differ from yours). For me its a song that could be great but isnt.
Here is a similar song to yours just way better, kick is a tad too high here as well but he does a better job of taking away the focus from the kick. Again just my opinion ofc.