Listenen to it today. The whole track is just way too simple, its like only one A-part to the whole song. It just repeated the one note melody and then its over basically.
edit: now listened in headphones, haha. Still pretty simple arrangement, too simple. I wouldnt have called this track finished, but thats me. Its still sounding pretty good, and its relatively balanced overall. bASSLINE IS a little too transformers for me, but doesnt disturb too much.
Edit: never judge tracks with your phone speakers, unless its steroid trance. always as bad.