Musically the ideas here are really good. The melody is nice and I like the chord progression as well.
Production wise it needs a lot of work.
The drums (as mentioned) do sound very 'preset' ish. I think making better choices on what sounds to use is something you should work on.
If you are struggling for good percussion/drum sounds, let me know, I have a ton of sample packs (too many if I'm being honest
) from the usual Dave Parkinson packs, Activa, Driftmoon, The Thrillseekers. I could grab some bits from some of them into a folder for you if you want?
As for the synths, Sylenth is still a good one, I still use it a lot myself. I'd also look at Vital or Surge which are great free ones (Vital especially)
Stick with it though, as I said, you've got the music/melodies down, which is what a lot of people struggle with, so spend some time on your sound choices and mixing and you'll get there!