The thing that makes it less credible is the damn kick, its slow, too hollow,too subby, and just not snappy or charachteristic enough, and listen how its still the loudest element in the track after in the climax. All you hear is basically the kick and pluck, and the other things just get buried in noise. The pluck isnt that great either, but not toooooo bad. I like the build and atmosphere of the track, but it doesnt reach full potential for me. its just a bit too formualic in its arrangements, sound-desing and needs a more original/stronger melody.