https://desperadomusic.bandcamp.com/track/sweet-rhythm

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My 1st attempt at trance would like feedback. Desperado Music

I would start by recommending you get (or develop) some proper samples and or VSTi's/Synths, the sounds you use are very basic imo.

Your kickdrum for instance is almost non-existent, same goes for any (sub) bass.

second, a lot of the elements in your track sound offbeat/clash making it very messy. make sure are your samples/sounds are sync.

then there's the levels/ Eq..


for a very first attempt i would say its not bad and the ideas/melodies are there. Keep at it, expand your library, watch tutorials (mixing/eqíng compression etc) and practice practice practice.

my 2 cents.

good luck 🙏
 
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