I feel too much of an emphasis on transformers/clinical "motorcycle engine" bassline here, and too much "on-beat" rhythms . I feel a need for softer/subtle rhythms, that dance around the bassline/kick, fading in an out more, creating a more dynamic sound rather than same loud vol throughout. It sounds a bit too rough and chaotic. Its pretty decent though, the execution pf everything. The synth of the mainriff needs a bit more charachter also, its a bit flat sounding and "stock" sounding. The melody progression is a bit ordinary and sorry to say boring to me. It doesnt really reach me or hook me in.
Final conclusion : Decent